Final reflection.

This is my final post and finally I got it. Now I'm going to analyse two diferent your-says, one of the first term of batxillerat and another of second batxillerat.


This is the first your-say:


Dear Teacher,
How are you? I hope you're well. I am writing to tell you about my school.
I have classes in Institute Castello Empuries. I'm in class with and thirty-one studens.They're all from different cauntries. Our teacher's English names is Sonia guilana.She's very nice and very good teacher. I have chosen the scientific baccalaureate because I want to be a chemistry teacher or physics teacher.I do baccalaureate because i want to have more studies for access a university but before i have do one test.
That's all my news. Write to me soon
Best whises.

I have been surprised when I find my first your-say because I saw that my level was vey low but now I think that I improved my level of english because when I arrived in high school I had a bad level of english but when I put the "batteries" and I get over the problems that I had. The people can see the improvement now in my blog also you can found a lots of things about my self or about my life. Now I am very happy because I'm be able to talk with english person but I need to study more for improve more my english.

As you can see, before I used undifficult adjectives and undifficult sentences because I want to finish the blog fast and have a five in the final mark, but now I think that I was stupid because I could do the things better but I don't do it.

Currently, I think that the writings are the best activities that shows my level of english, because when I write , I feel that my engilish improve and I motivate mysalf to continue and do it better, also every time I give the writings to the teacher and she corrects the writings and after that she gaves me it and I feel happy because I wrote in Enlish and also I learn a new lenguage.

In conclusion, I think that my final your-says of the third term in second batxillerat are much better than my old posts in first batxillerat and I gave the thanks to the teachers and to my friends because they helps me to improve my level and also to learn a new lenguage and talk with the foreigners.



Best wishes !!!!!!! :) :) :)

A formal E-MAIL.

Dear Mr.President Barack Obama,

 

I am writing to tell you that the human rights are violated. I was in New York and I saw that the people are discriminated by their religions because  they think that it is a fake.

 

According to the Article 1 of the human rights, all the human race is born free and equal and they are fitted of reason and conscience. But is not only broken in your country, because I travelled around the world and I saw that they are violated everywhere.

 

But not only the Article 1 is violated also the Article 5. The Article 5 says: "No one shall be subjected to torture or to cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment or punishment".

This Human Right is not complied in many countries. In your  country there are cases of torture to terrorists and mistreat of immigrants.

 

In view of that we are angry because the human rights are not respected and also I think that theb  government has to do something to solve the problema.

 

Your faithfully,

 

Soufyane el Baizi el Jamili and Martí Sanz.

Can you have a good relationship with your exes?

In most relationships, the time to say goodbye usually arrives at one point or another. You have shared memories with you ex that will  make you laugh or cry, and it's time to take your experiences and put them in your back pocket and move on. 

I think that the person who does the breaking up feels like less of a bad guy by offering that sense of truce: "It's not you, it's me. We can still be friends." This is the typical expresion that  the person who wants to break up says.

The offering of friendship provides the dumper with the consolation of knowing they aren't such a horrible person because they still want to be friends with their ex.

When you break up with your ex, after a few days she becomes a monster because she wants to make you feel jealous and this provokes you and your ex never arrive to have a good relationship.

Your ex always wants to be the friend of your friends and destroy your relationships with the other girls that you love. She is like Voldemort because he wants to kill Harry Potter but the only difference that he has  is that she want to destoy him and not to kill.

Another thing is that she always are where you are, in the restaurant, supermaket or another place.

In conclusion you can't have a good relationship with your exes because they always want to ruin you.

Human Rights

The humans rights are the union of the meaning of the word human and the word rights, in other words, we obtain that   are the rights that you have simply because you are human.
There are thirty human rights and this are created on December 10/1948, when the United Nations General Assembly adopted and proclaimed the Universal Declaration of Human Rights, the full text appears on the following pages . Following this historic act the Assembly called upon all Member countries to publicize the text of the Declaration and to be " distributed , displayed, read and expounded principally in schools and other educational institutions , without distinction based on the political status of countries or territories . "
I have chosen this human right because I think that the people didn't accomplish it. We can see curently that because the war that was in Siria a lots of peoples emigrated to Europa and the European people don't hepl him and they didn't give food and shalter.

You can see more in this link:

• 25. Food and Shelter for All

 

 

Dialogue

Dialogue between a coupe before and after marriage with Marti.


http://www.ivoox.com/10795719

Empuriabrava trip.

Can the Internet make the world a beeter please?

Nowadays the Internet is the thing that the people use every day, every hour,every minute. The Internet is something that allows you to search the thing that you wish.

Firstly then Internet is important because thanks to this we can communicate with other people without call. We can use whatsapp or facebook. Another characteristic is that we could send photos or videos to the other people and also they could send another things.

Secondly  Internet allows the progress of the science and thanks to this improvement we could know more things about the universe and the Earth. 

Currently we can see the improvement of medicine and of the health, the people have more life to live and all this things are obtained thanks to the Internet.

Self-Presentation and opinion.

NAME & TOPIC:		MARK
Presentation         10%	Do you use any resources: powerpoint, video, images, sound, real material...? Are the resources focused on the topic? Do the resources support your oral explanation? Is the timing 5- 10 minutes?	8
Body language & eye contact         10%	Are  you looking at your audience most of the time? Are you reading occasionally from your notes ? Are you doing any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?	7
Structure             10%	Do you organize your ideas in order of importance? Do you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? (First, then, secondly, on the one hand, on the other, finally…)	6
Content         40%	Do you introduce new information to your audience? Is your information  detailed, clear and...? Do you give/show examples?	35
Language        20%	Is your grammar correct, complex? (verbs, word order, tenses learnt in class) Is your vocabulary rich, varied (synonyms, idioms, expressions, phasal verbs, topic-related) Do you use sentence linkers? (and, but, moreover, also, furthermore, although, however…) Do you use fillers? (well, you know, for example, one second, repeating a word…)	14
Pronunciation & Intonation         10%	Do you know how to pronounce all your words? Did you check the pronunciation? Do you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? Do you speak in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?	7
Self-Evaluation	You are your teacher! :-)                                 FINAL MARK:	77/100

Opinion:

I think I made a good presentation because I explained my work in a simple and understandable mode, but in truth it was completely the opposite as there were different chemical formulas which could make it complicated.
Also I think I have experienced an improvement in my accent because I could say the words quickly and easily without any problem.

Failed to upload the video of my presentation because of the automatic restoration that has taken my phone.

Still you can see my research paper in the library of the institute of Castello d'Empuries or you can order them a disc.

Presentation

SELF-EVALUATION OF YOUR ORAL PRESENTATION

I think as a group we made a good presentation , but individually I was nervous for the first time in my life.

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I don't know what  happened to me , I think that is because there were more people , but  I managed to achieve progress and do well .


This is the video our presentation :

NAME & TOPIC:		MARK
Presentation         10%	Do you use any resources: powerpoint, video, images, sound, real material...? Are the resources focused on the topic? Do the resources support your oral explanation? Is the timing 5- 10 minutes?	8
Body language & eye contact         10%	Are  you looking at your audience most of the time? Are you reading occasionally from your notes ? Are you doing any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?	6
Structure             10%	Do you organize your ideas in order of importance? Do you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? (First, then, secondly, on the one hand, on the other, finally…)	6
Content         40%	Do you introduce new information to your audience? Is your information  detailed, clear and...? Do you give/show examples?	35
Language        20%	Is your grammar correct, complex? (verbs, word order, tenses learnt in class) Is your vocabulary rich, varied (synonyms, idioms, expressions, phasal verbs, topic-related) Do you use sentence linkers? (and, but, moreover, also, furthermore, although, however…) Do you use fillers? (well, you know, for example, one second, repeating a word…)	13
Pronunciation & Intonation         10%	Do you know how to pronounce all your words? Did you check the pronunciation? Do you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? Do you speak in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?	6
Self-Evaluation	You are your teacher! :-)                                 FINAL MARK:	74/100

A joke podcast

Is the humor necessary?

Humor is necessary because all the people should to smile and laugh. Laughter is a powerful antidote to stress, pain, and conflict, it is a strong medicine for your mind and your body.I remember one senence of Paul E.McGhee that said: " Your sense of humor is one of the most powerful tools you have to make certain that your daily ood and emotional state support good health".

First of all, the humor(laughther) relaxes the whole body, protects the heart, dissolves distressing emotions and others.
The humor , as I said before is a magical antidote that dissolves all the problems that you have.

Secondly , the humor produces a sentational emotion that produce a smile, and this makes to you a lots of things.

In conclusion, humor is a very impotant for the human race because produces a lots of things in your body and makes you laugh.

Letter to my teacher

Dear teacher,

How are you ? I hope you are well. My name is Soufyane El Baizi El Jamili . I was born in  Hospital of Figueras in 1998 , I’m sexteen years old and I live in Empuriabrava, Spain. My favourite sports are football and basketball but now I don’t play to any club because the studies are more difficult and I need more time for study. 

In this moment I doing second scientific baccalaureate because I would like to study something related to medicine and / or biology . This subjects need a high mark and I’m ready to get this note. As Obama said in his speech “Nothing happens if you fall a million times , the important thing is that we will never surrender”.Thanks this sentence I could know that from failures appears the succes. For example I have a similar problem equal this; I have a problem with a spanish class because the exams are very difficult ,and I never could overcome the 5/10 but thanks the effort, I improved them.

In conclusion I focused in never fall ever and if I fall I will rise another time and for get this I need to remember that ,never I have to drop out the school and cut class.

Best regards,

Soufyane el Baizi el Jamili.

Final Reflection

1.  Can you see an improvement on your level of English in the past year/s?  Where, for example?

The first writing I did in high school was:

Dear Teacher,

How are you? I hope you're well. I am writing to tell you about my school.

I have classes in Institute Castello Empuries. I'm in class with and thirty-one studens.They're all from different cauntries. Our teacher's English names is Sonia guilana.She's very nice and very good teacher.

I have chosen the scientific baccalaureate because I want to be a chemistry teacher or physics teacher.I do baccalaureate because i want to have more studies for access a university but before i have do one test.

That's all my news. Write to me soon

Best whises.

I think that I improved my level of english because when I arrived in high school I had a bad level of english but when I put the "batteries" I got every day better.

We can see the improvement now in my blog ,Now I am very happy because I'm be able to talk with english person but I need to study more for improve more my english.

2. Which activity best shows your level of English?

I think that the writings are the best activities that shows my level of english, because when I write , I feel that my engilish improve.

3. Which activities were really USEFUL for you to improve your English? Why?

I think that what is useful to improve my English are the writings .

Because every time I give one to the teacher, and she corrects him I feel happy and also improved my English .

4. Which activities did you NOT find useful to learn English? Why not?

I think that all activities have improved my english

5. Which activities would like to do again next year to keep on improving your English?

I think that to improve  English level , we can do activities that are fun and are more complicated at a time.

So wr can get to improve our English at the highest level possible.

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We have made the world a better place?

In the 20th century, the human race have been improved by tegnology resources , but that has made that the world were a polluted place.
I don't agree with this , for several reasons.

• First, I think that we have to use the renewable energy and we have to stop to use coal and the petrol, because If we did this we could live without any problems.
• Secondly, the wars caused a lot of problems, and I think that I found the solution and this is the cooperation. If two people cooperate, they won't have any problem.
• Third, the tegnology recources have increased and this is thanks the new intelligence , I think that this is the only news that are good for the Earth.

In conlusion, we have made the world a better place with tegnology resources but we will have to wipe out the bad chemical compounds and we have to stop the wars.

Self-evaluation

SELF-EVALUATION OF YOUR ORAL PRESENTATION

1- Watch your presentation and answer the following questions.

NAME & TOPIC:		MARK
Presentation         10%	Do you use any resources: powerpoint, video, images, sound, real material...? Are the resources focused on the topic? Do the resources support your oral explanation? Is the timing 5- 10 minutes?	8
Body language & eye contact         10%	Are  you looking at your audience most of the time? Are you reading occasionally from your notes ? Are you doing any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?	6
Structure             10%	Do you organize your ideas in order of importance? Do you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? (First, then, secondly, on the one hand, on the other, finally…)	6
Content         40%	Do you introduce new information to your audience? Is your information  detailed, clear and...? Do you give/show examples?	35
Language        20%	Is your grammar correct, complex? (verbs, word order, tenses learnt in class) Is your vocabulary rich, varied (synonyms, idioms, expressions, phasal verbs, topic-related) Do you use sentence linkers? (and, but, moreover, also, furthermore, although, however…) Do you use fillers? (well, you know, for example, one second, repeating a word…)	12
Pronunciation & Intonation         10%	Do you know how to pronounce all your words? Did you check the pronunciation? Do you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? Do you speak in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?	5
Self-Evaluation	You are your teacher! :-)                                 FINAL MARK:	72/100

Opinion: 

I think that I was doing a good presentation but I haven't had the oportunity for express that I am able to do this better.
In this presentation I talked about air pollution and I had explain what are the effects,causes and what are the solutions that we made for prevent the disaster.
Finally I had a problem with the phone , I thought the video was intact. But when I wanted to pass the video into the computer, all of information was deleted.

Review: La Isla

Summary:
The movie is based in science fiction, Lincoln, which lately beset by unexplained nightmares, is restless and increasingly questioning the restrictions that have been imposed on his life. But the truth catches you off guard when his growing curiosity leads to the terrible discovery that everything about his existence is a lie , that The Island is a cruel hoax ... and that he, Jordan , and all those who know are more valuable dead than alive. With time running out , Lincoln and Jordan engage in a daring escape to the outside world they've never met . Once you are outside and away from the prying eyes of the institute, the innocent friendship they shared begins to become something deeper. But forces pursuing them relentlessly complex , Lincoln and Jordan have a primary mission : to live .

Best Part:
For me the best part was when the clone found his clone, because the clone really  he wanted to explain everything to the other Lincoln . But unfortunately , the really Lincon he wanted to kill the clone  , but could not.

Opinion:

Personally, the movie is very good, the plot, everything is very good , imagine that there is a company that cloned people only to kill them when the owner needs an organ, makes you think , does not it ? And as two individuals who know nothing of the outside world , they manage to escape and find answers and save.

Description image

In this photo you can see a beautiful  and amazing scenery , is an image that surely has made an expert because it has been very well done.

In the picture you can see how light it reflects in the water, as the sun illuminates nature and as the waterfall arrive its destination .(water)

Probably the picture could have been done in southern Ameria , or some European country , as these are the only countries that have climatic conditions suitable to have this type of land.

In the final part of the landscape, we can see a mountain where have grown up a lot of trees which make the landscape more seen.

Opinion :
I think the man has been the cause of many problems including desertification .

We need to save energy and stop to pollute.

Letter

 27 Antony Road

Blessingtong

29th September

Lawyer's Office

Justice House

11 High Street

Blessingtong

To whom it may concern ,

I would like to apply for a job in the Lawyer's Office as an Lawyer. 

First of all, I am going to talk about my self. 

When I was a child while I was studying in the high school I had been working in the Mercadona supermarket. Later while I was finishing my degree I helped my father, who is judge arrangeing his stuff into files.

Then, when I finally got the degree, I continued working with my father, but as a real lawyer.

Now I am applying for in the Justice House because I want to be more self-sufficient and have my own trial.

So I would like to work in Blessintong Lawyer's Office.

Looking forward to your prompt reply,

Yours faithfully,

Collum Smith

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